Leila Week 8

This week's writing stimulus was the words: green, dancer, swimming, gas, and likely

I was cleaning the attic when I found a pendant. It was shaped like a hot air balloon . I put it on and  was transported to a  new world where green gum drops grow on strawberry licorice trees and houses were made of gingerbread.   I realised I was most likely in  the world of the Nutcracker.  I walked on and I saw the swans swimming in a lake. that had gas bubbles that smells like candy canes. and it also had ballet dancer sitting in the most beautiful diamond tutu and leotard.  I took off the pendant to give to the dancer but  I was back in the attic

Mia Week 8

This week's writing stimulus was the words: green, dancer, swimming, gas, and likely

My friend Dancer and I are “SO HOT” it’s 40 degrees in the shade. We’re imagining being in a cave there is crystal green water. Dancer and I decided to go swimming in it. Gas bubbles rise to the top of the cave and then the bubbles burst with fragrances of bubblegum, strawberries and frangipanis. A particularly big bubble rose to the top of the cave  and then …. pop the bubble popped filling the cave with the beautiful rich aroma of fresh chocolate cake.

“This is not likely”, Dancer interjected.

“Shush you heartless fantasy slayer!”  

Mia Week 7

This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...the door opened and there it was...

“Hello my name is Sarah and today is THE BEST DAY EVER it’s…... my birthday!!!!! Nana’s been giving me clues to what my birthday present is. She said

It’s  cuddly and slobbery too and it makes you smile whenever you’re blue.

“Is it a….. puppy?”I asked.

“No” Nana replied.

“ Here’s another rhyme”

Roses are red, violets are blue your birthday present is perfect for you.

“Hmm is it a unicorn?” I gasped.

“hahaha no” answered Nana.

Nana told me that the last clue is that my birthday present is  behind the door.

The door opened and there it was, Mum’s new baby.

Leila Week 7

This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...the door opened and there it was...

It was Saturday morning and I was getting up to go play in the park with my friends when I heard something in my closet. It was scratching and growling and it was scary .I wanted to run and hide but I wanted to see what was in my closet. I got closer and closer and closer and closer AND CLOSER AND THEN  THE DOOR OPENED AND THERE IT WAS……….…………. IT RAN AT  ME  AND  IT  SHOCKED  ME. It was... … my puppy dog Coco. That silly  puppy always gets in everything. So I picked her up and we went to the park.

Leila Week 6

This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...she was shocked to see... 


Sally is so excited because it's her birthday! She jumped downstairs and she shocked to see that her Mum,Dad,brother and Nena that they had all forgotten her birthday. Sally was so upset but still she ate her breakfast ,got her backpack and marched to school.When Sally got home from school she was very sad and she went to her room and did her homework and read some books.Sally's brother Abraham said
 "Come on let's go outside and have some ice-cream "
and so they went outside and  "SURPRISE HAPPY  BIRTHDAY SALLY"
Sally said"I knew you would not forget my birthday".

Mia Week 6

This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...she was shocked to see... 

Michelle Payne the jockey got employed to race in the Melbourne Cup. She was riding the six year old horse, Prince of Penzance, and she was the number nineteen. Her colours are red, green and white.  The first prize is $605 690.

Michelle Payne was at the back of the race then she moved to the middle and at the final stretch she blasted to the front winning the race. SHE WAS SHOCKED TO SEE THAT SHE HAD WON THE RACE.

She was exhilarated and overjoyed.

The horse got his favourite food. Michelle Payne was the first female jockey to win the Melbourne Cup.