This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...the door opened and there it was...
“Hello my name is Sarah and today is THE BEST DAY EVER it’s…... my birthday!!!!! Nana’s been giving me clues to what my birthday present is. She said
“Hello my name is Sarah and today is THE BEST DAY EVER it’s…... my birthday!!!!! Nana’s been giving me clues to what my birthday present is. She said
It’s cuddly and slobbery too and it makes you smile whenever you’re blue.
“Is it a….. puppy?”I asked.
“No” Nana replied.
“ Here’s another rhyme”
Roses are red, violets are blue your birthday present is perfect for you.
“Hmm is it a unicorn?” I gasped.
“hahaha no” answered Nana.
Nana told me that the last clue is that my birthday present is behind the door.
The door opened and there it was, Mum’s new baby.
Mia, what great rhyming to reveal a surprise! I wasn't expecting the present to be a new baby brother or sister. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Mia!...Beautiful rhyming and an unexpected ending!...The best present ever!!!
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