This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...she was shocked to see...
Michelle Payne the jockey got employed to race in the Melbourne Cup. She was riding the six year old horse, Prince of Penzance, and she was the number nineteen. Her colours are red, green and white. The first prize is $605 690.
Michelle Payne the jockey got employed to race in the Melbourne Cup. She was riding the six year old horse, Prince of Penzance, and she was the number nineteen. Her colours are red, green and white. The first prize is $605 690.
Michelle Payne was at the back of the race then she moved to the middle and at the final stretch she blasted to the front winning the race. SHE WAS SHOCKED TO SEE THAT SHE HAD WON THE RACE.
She was exhilarated and overjoyed.
The horse got his favourite food. Michelle Payne was the first female jockey to win the Melbourne Cup.
Mia what a very interesting story, and a true account at that! I had to look up and read more about Michelle Payne; what an inspiring story to women all over the world. What a great way to use the prompt, and you did a marvelous job telling the story of Michelle Payne - very nice work!
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I enjoyed this and the accompanying comments...This one is definitely for the showcase!...Well done, Mia!!!
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