This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...the door opened and there it was...
It was Saturday morning and I was getting up to go play in the park with my friends when I heard something in my closet. It was scratching and growling and it was scary .I wanted to run and hide but I wanted to see what was in my closet. I got closer and closer and closer and closer AND CLOSER AND THEN THE DOOR OPENED AND THERE IT WAS……….…………. IT RAN AT ME AND IT SHOCKED ME. It was... … my puppy dog Coco. That silly puppy always gets in everything. So I picked her up and we went to the park.
Great start, it left me wondering what was going to happen, and a great finish ! Good to know it had a happy ending ! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd Coco loves you too!...Leila, you certainly have a neck for creativity...Keep on writing!
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