Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Leila Week 7

This week's writing stimulus was the phrase ...the door opened and there it was...

It was Saturday morning and I was getting up to go play in the park with my friends when I heard something in my closet. It was scratching and growling and it was scary .I wanted to run and hide but I wanted to see what was in my closet. I got closer and closer and closer and closer AND CLOSER AND THEN  THE DOOR OPENED AND THERE IT WAS……….…………. IT RAN AT  ME  AND  IT  SHOCKED  ME. It was... … my puppy dog Coco. That silly  puppy always gets in everything. So I picked her up and we went to the park.

2 comments:

  1. Great start, it left me wondering what was going to happen, and a great finish ! Good to know it had a happy ending ! :)

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  2. And Coco loves you too!...Leila, you certainly have a neck for creativity...Keep on writing!

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