Tuesday, 22 March 2016

Leila week 12

The writing stimulus this week was the words: lie, row, fly, chips and sweet.

I lined the tools  up in a row and suddenly my pendant was flashing like a raging fire. I tried again and again and finally I was home in the attic at last. I went downstairs and ate chips and a sweet.I told my mum all about my adventures and she told me that my great grandmother had owned the pendant and my grandmother owned it and she owned it and now I owned the pendant.She told me that she remembers the ballerina with the diamond tutu and leotard. I went to my room and l lie there on my bed . But I decided to go back to Superhero Land and fly through the air  with the superheroes.

2 comments:

  1. Leila you've done a wonderful job writing a story of fantasy that was really fun to read. I love the idea of a magic pendant and it sounds as if it transports the one who has it to magical places. Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.

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  2. Yay. Background history on the pendant. I wonder if there are more of them or if you have the only one. And why it exists. Very interesting finding out by happen chance it's abilities. Maybe her mother or grandmother can let her know their experiences. Are they part of a secret society? I do like your descriptions now with the pendant flashing like raging fire. I can see that. I like it when you bring me into the story rather than reading about something and you are getting better the more you write.

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