Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Mia Week 9

This week's writing stimulus was the theme "Superheroes"

Hey there my name is Cookie Wuffs and I’m the bravest, most vicious dog ever. I am standing on a prickle right now oh ah the pain boohoo I want my mummy!!!!!
Now that that's out of my foot where were we oh yes that's right I am the best dog super hero EVER. I snarl upon cats they’re so cattie. Unlike us dogs we’re the most intelligent animals that ever existed.OH NO a fire in the house, never fear I’ll save you mummy. How do I get to her you ask? I will fly to her (thump) ouch  maybe I’ll just run to to her.

4 comments:

  1. Hey Mia. I enjoyed reading your story. Cookie Wulffs looks great in his Superman outfit...Keep up the good work!

    Mystery Writer

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  2. Great job Mia, really love the description of Cookie Wuffs, and such a great photo to compliment you story, keep it up ! :D

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  3. I hope you continue this story. I would like to hear more about the adventures of Cookie Wuffs. I loved that cats were catty, I can just see them hanging out as cool kids making snide comments. I hope that Cookie Wuffs has a story with them maybe as Cookies arch enemy and they end up wet or something and have to flee

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  4. Hi Mia,

    I loved reading reading your story on Cookie Wuffs! So entertaining and full of action! I also love you!
    Your cousin from Sydney who loves and misses you!
    Nane and the family xoxox

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