Wednesday, 18 May 2016
Mia week 18
I saw dazzling waterfalls with sparkling streams. In the streams gracefully swam gorgeous dolphins and vibrant fish. I stared in amazed silence . Suddenly a dragon came swooping down and caught me like a fisherman catching a fish. I looked up and saw that I was being carried by a big ferocious,orange mother dragon now I understood what was going on AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH. She let out a huge roar it shook the ground like thunder.She picked me up by my pajamas and held me over her babies’ gaping mouths, I was so terrified I almost did a number 2. Then she dropped me...
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Describing words are marvellous, they add so much to the richness of the story. I did not realise that you had started you day before you got dressed. Flying without proper gear, so this character is also very impulsive.
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