Wednesday, 11 May 2016

Mia week 17


She blasted up into  the sky. I was only hanging on to her by one feather.Predator shrieked painfully, out came the feather. I dropped.A big gust of wind came twirling me round and round in circles. I lost consciousness……
When I woke up, there was Predator  staring down at me with her large yellow eyes.I sat up and found myself at the bottom of a gorgeous staircase leading up to the sky. I decided to climb it so up and up I climbed Predator helped me along the way. When I got to the top I saw.....
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  1. Unknown19 May 2016 at 02:35

    Literally hanging by a feather. Yup was as dangerous as it sounded. Nice transition piece from a high stress point to another "yeeeess" moment. Also nice transition from the air to the ground.

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